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    Standing on the beach, the man’s eyes are fixed on the horizon. The ocean wind roars mists of grief.

    oftentimes the high tide and the ebb
    bring up secrets from the sea bottom
    to the sand

    The man wants to be alone, zigzag memories weighing heavy on his heart. 

    the two shrapnels are still out there
    one was operated from his chest in Raleigh
    expertly done sterile conditions
    the other stuck out in the shoulder
    of a bearded savage long dead
    and the man used his bayonet
    to remove it for memento

    The man keeps going back to the beach every evening; the pieces might wash ashore.

    the waves always bring plenty
    but the two metals remain
    deformed and content where they are
    amnesiac resting carefree
    forgotten are the cries of the wounded
    many never made it home

    Then one evening an old fisherman tells the man, you are quiet, sir, seem disturbed inside.

    once true belief overcomes sorrow
    dark memories fade
    the soul is freed
    and you’ll open to the world
    again

    Quite a philosopher, the man thinks, or Sunday school teacher. Might have a point, though.

    the man walks back to his car
    the night sets in
    the moon takes over the sky
    and the yoke is lifted

    Back home, the man takes stock.

    he did the right thing
    when he hurled the shrapnels in the Atlantic
    and now both stay put there
    brine cleanses all stains

    Two shrapnels; two savages. One savage fought on the wrong side, the other savage fought on the other wrong side.


    Published in Dissident Voice, October 12, 2025




    What Matters Most


    don’t waste time
    brawling with hungry lion cubs
    arguing with derelict soothsayers
    arrogant loud and wrong

    you’ll need all your mettle
    to fight the good fight
    to save yourself and others

    with every minute wait
    you’re another minute late
    having been planted deep
    in the quicksand of disbelief

    Published in Dissident Voice, on September 28, 2025



    The Old Clock


    widow Liz Mary is lithe and bright
    working two jobs
    always scrimping
    still penniless always

    she raises her children in a house where
    the rooms have to be rearranged daily
    out of necessity
    not for fun

    she has an old grandfather clock
    it shows random hours not proper time
    to teach the kids the certainty of unpredictability

    all in all
    it would still be a good life
    if not for endless cacophony outside
    the world’s spinning left and right

    Möbius strip concepts are stomped on
    tossed aside then brought back
    to show the government’s hell bent on
    spreading the democracy thing abroad
    defending the Constitution thing back home
    no matter what it takes

    Published in Dissident Voice, September 7, 2025




    Echo in a Bottle

     
    on a Carolina beach I slogged into the labyrinth of history, or at least a lost man’s story.

    old glass in the gray sand
    gleamed a round bottle’s narrow neck
    probably made in Europe long time back
    a note was inside the message faded
    someone’s last hope in a frigid flask
    a longing goodbye letter sent
    the ocean was foe and his only friend

    I was curious what had been penned on the yellowed papyrus but there was little chance finding out; the ink had deteriorated to a sigh by the years and relentless sun.

    days later odd thoughts crop up
    reverie’s trans blinds and ideas roam
    marooned on an island was the man
    struggling dawn to dusk and then
    died alone far from his country
    far from his home

    reduced to a perpetual hermit, what was going on in his mind? Does belief separate from the body when no one else is around? If yes, did the two have bitter quarrels?

    narrow’s the land the water is wide
    as the Moon travels so does the tide
    the bottle floats away the man remains
    marooned on the island all his days

    weeks later I still can’t make out the words but have come to recall, I wrote the message


    A short version of this poem was published in Friday Flash Fiction, August 4, 2025.
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